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“Saying Goodbye”

Looking at you as you go to leave
The wind blows through your hair
Like it blows through the trees
I really want to touch your pretty face
There is so much that I want to say

And I really don’t want you to go
And I really don’t want you to go
If I did don’t you think that I’d say so
No, I really don’t want you to go

All alone
I’ve said my goodbye

jimmy g--do you see my heart? it is lying on the floor.

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