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If a dream is a lie.
And a lie is a dream.
Then isn't a dream just a lie we wish we were or had.
Instead of the life you have now.
So dream away your lies of life for I know what your one true real dream is. It's me

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by stupidfreak

Great job!!
Beautiful. I love it.

( Posted by: DCbabe [Member] On: October 28, 2004 )

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