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Verse:

Cagebird screeching, mess this crib up!
Pillow of luster, Bite on my whisper!
Fists of elbows, Cry on this sound!
Wipe that ache away, im about to bust your day!

Chorus:

And everytime i try to start this way,
Every single person just makes my day!
Getting shoved and making that mark,
Im just dancing around, and moshing with a landshark!

Fancy Drum Solo Part

Verse 2:

Screaming hallways, get that hair cut!
Madman brewing, make that crisper!
Stranger dying, Make that a pound!
Splash that moshpit, i will make my way!

Chorus 2:

And everytime i try to start this way,
Every single person just makes my day!
Getting shoved and making that mark,
Im just dancing around, and moshing with a landshark!

Bridge:

One more song
One last break
Bring another encore
Do it for my sake.
One last Shark
One last beat
Bring it to the middle
Breech it to the peak! ! !

Final Chorus:

And everytime i try to start this way,
Every single person just makes my day!
Getting shoved and making that mark,
Im just dancing around, and moshing with a landshark!










------
Norris & Bumpkins Inc.


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The following comments are for "Moshpit & A Land Shark"
by CheddyAndNorris

mosh that shark
I LOVE IT! This is my favorite. fancy drum solo? YES!

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: October 27, 2004 )

Woot!
Love it....so deep. Moshing with a landshark? I can't even comprehend the true meaning of it....and yet I feel it, burning into my soul. Please, write more. Your lyrics will enlighten the world.

( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: October 28, 2004 )

moshing hurts
some of your stuff is a bit scattered and just plain nonsense...and i say that only because i think that you intended them to be that way. anyways, this song is a bit different. its still a bit crazy but i can actually hear it as a song. good work. i'm sure that writing these songs makes you giggle inside.

jimmy g

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: October 29, 2004 )

odd but interesting
odd but interesting...im sure you have fun dancing with the sharks but i like use of moshing with a landshark

( Posted by: XzX [Member] On: November 14, 2004 )

defense of nonsense
Ancient example:

He bag production he got walrus gumboot



Bravo!

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: November 14, 2004 )





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