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I'm wasting away
Your time slips into me and straight away
I see that it hurts us
Our wasted moments
Choke us as we Lie
About what we wanted to do
with what we had
I'll never forget what we could have been
but now unmentionable
I'll never forget what will never be again
but now unmentionable
The weather changes and the
Air around us is a smothering
Frenzy of Calm, and yet,
Not quite enough,
To keep me here in this body,
Holding me back from where
I want to be
Separate the body from the mind
This body holding me
Is not where I belong
Separate my body from my mind
and I am free

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