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real life
by stupidfreak (Member) - published: October 26, 2004
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Category - Poetry
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Real life is not what it seems.
Real life is nothing but a dream.
Real life has only one exit death.
Real life is filled with sorrow.
Real life seems so fake.


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I sympathize with how you feel when you wrote this poem, it feels like this sometimes in real life, but I wouldn't really agree to this in most times.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: October 27, 2004 )





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