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why do i
is it important
why waste
my time
but what's to waste
is it too much
too little
does anyone
even give a damn
i am
i think
and yet
do i exist
will i
won't i
wish i never
why do i
how come i ask
why do i care
what so important
is an answer even there
at the end what if
no answer exists
was it all a waste
why do i
bother these things
inside my head
burden my heart
my soul my space
let it go
yet no way out
why do i
just rot and die
why can't he
come and take
fly with him
away away
far from here...................................

For my eternal muse... We are of one heart... Forever

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