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Repainting the Walls.

The walls have gotten old
and the colour faded.

The common ground
The ground of great joy,
Of great bitterness,
Has become uncomforting,
and time passes by.

They want to repaint the house orange,
But they all have in mind different shades.

Another Day On Earth

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