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His heart light,
It was no longer his burden to bare.
Little did he know the power of the mind,
For after he beheld her,
His so once light heart, was burdened;
Burdened with love for her
His array of great valor, an ingenious facade
Did so little to confront what was buried deep in him; his love for her.
In the twixt of his work hours did, but one thing
Ponder at her loveliness.
The intricacies of her body, only a prince would consort with,
The once strong heart, was no more to be seen,
For there inside, his love for her did nothing but burgeon.


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