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I thought I saw you yesterday-
Glancing at the moon-
Snow falling all around you-
Your smile dancing by my room-

I thought I saw you yesterday-
Standing on the autumn leaves-
Your eyes staring back at me-
Hair blowing by a blossomed breeze-

I thought I saw you yesterday-
Gazing at the sunset-
Colors of beauty all around you-
At a place where we once met-

I thought I saw you yesterday-
Amused by the bumble bees-
Smelling the flowers all around you-
It was all but humble see-

I thought I saw you yesterday-
Arising thru imagery-
I Never saw you yesterday-
Despisng my eyes of trickery-


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The following comments are for "I thought I saw you yesterday"
by Essence

nice


I liked the heading, it aroused my curiosity and I must say I didn't regret.








( Posted by: Henriamaa [Member] On: October 24, 2004 )

yesterday
how sad when eyes trick!
beautifully arranged...it is like a sweet song by the Beatles' Mcrtiny

glad i read and hope you will see him tomoro

all the best,Hiba

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: November 25, 2005 )





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