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A view of peace, the land sprawled out before me and around me, breathtaking. Of all that I have seen in my life, this beauty is second only to my beloved wife standing beside me. The beauty is a great deal more beautiful with her beside me, her features captured forever in the light of the afternoon sun.
“We look upon the world and see ourselves, a life together and a future to live for each other. Eternity bound in our love for each other, we go on forever.” We say the words together, in time with each other, our voices like music joined. Perfect in each others eyes, true love that grows stronger with every second we live. Sheer and pure bliss.

Apart and alone, it feels so painful. Unable to be together for years, yearning and wishing always to be in each others arms. Waking up and calling for each other, never receiving a response. That is true hell in love, the cold loneliness that seems to last forever. I miss you my love, always do, my heart and soul calls for you and you alone. I feel empty and incomplete without you, do you feel the same? Wish I could see you right now, hold you in my arms, feel your lips against mine.
To see you now would be beyond joy, to hear your voice would be like a song that makes you feel special. I love you, I love you so much, wish we were together. Miss you always, love you forever.

The wait over, the barriers gone, in your arms at last. I can feel tears of joy in my eyes, we’ve both waited so long. I hope we’ll never be apart, never.

I just wish to say this and to say only to you, my love. I love you, I love you so much and so deeply. My love for you is beyond the deepest of oceans, beyond the deepest expanses of the universe. I would and will do anything for you, I will die for you if I have to. Only for you do I say this, for only you and you alone-I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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The following comments are for "How often can I say these three words?"
by TrojanTony

I love you too
You know perfectly well what I think of it. I love you too, honey. I love you so much, it is hard to be apart as we must be now. I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

( Posted by: DragonessWriter [Member] On: April 24, 2002 )

to TrojanTony
I agree with Jessice, that was really trite. There must be more interesting emotion from love then old words.

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: April 24, 2002 )





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