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Love is so special
Yet can make you feel lost
It can arrive just like the springtime
And melt like the morning frost.

We must find ways to nuture
Always grow our love with care
Never ever take for granted
The love that we both share.

Mistakes are bound to happen
We may hurt each other's heart
Yet don't give up to easily
It will tear us apart.

Love resembles a bright flame
That lights a dark starry night
Never ever let this flame burn down
Rekindle with all your might.

Take a moment every day
Talk openly about our feelings
Take the time to show we care
Treasure each and every moment
Because to find true love is rare.

------
len daniels


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The following comments are for "A Sister's Brother's Love"
by crowhaven

Leonard
The title threw me off, I was trying to figure it out and where this would lead.
I like your poem alot. I love LOVE poems of all kinds. You wrote this nicely.

So, thank you for this warm poem a nice tribute to whoever you wish it for. Finding True love is rare, when true love is there, IT finds you.

Thanks for sharing,
Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: October 24, 2004 )

A Sister's Brother's Love
I like this poem alot. You describe love perfectly and it rhymes really well.

Thanks for this great poem.

-Alianne-

( Posted by: Dreamer09 [Member] On: October 25, 2004 )

Gramps lesson
This reminded me of my own late Grandfather- a blacksmith in his day. I remember how gentle he was and caring. There was absolutely "Nothing" you could not do if you set your mind to it!
I enjoyed this very much

( Posted by: crowhaven [Member] On: October 25, 2004 )





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