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Your tender eyes seem to wrap
Themselves around me
Protecting me- wanting to
Heal my wounded wings.

A gentle kind look in your eyes,
And an apology for touching
My soul.
I welcome your tenderness.

So you take me in your arms
And as I lay my head on
Your chest, I feel warmth
Spreading through-healing my wings.


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"Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding" Khalil Gibran, The Prophet




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The following comments are for "Healing Wings"
by Serendipity

healing wings
this has the same kind of theme as "safe arms", it has the whole soft dreamy touch to it. nice work

( Posted by: seniorme [Member] On: October 23, 2004 )





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