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60 Watts try to light this room
Flowers on the wall never bloom
Ikea table without the chairs
Someoneís thoughts without a care
A letterbox with many slots
This is where dignity stops
Bed-sit single flat fucking room
This is it last stop, to nowhere, fucking zoom
This rides forever hope itís over soon
Fucking bed-sit fuckin room.





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The following comments are for "60 WATTS some adult expression"
by Gordon

60 watts
burning in the darkness.

Enjoyed this; first two lines especially.

( Posted by: slackjaw [Member] On: February 20, 2011 )





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