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There once was a person called Med,
Who had to stay in bed.
Because he was sick,
She called his son Rick,
To tell him he'll soon be dead.

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~ Blind courage is another way to say stupidity.


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by 00Greenleaf00

Leaf, usually amusing
this I didnt' follow. He stayed in bed, because he was sick. She called him to say soon she would be dead.
Confused me.

Dar

( Posted by: dareva [Member] On: October 24, 2004 )

confused
i think that you should say "a girl" or "lady called med". and then change because he was sick, to she was sick. i think that those are just errors or maybe med isn't a lady and i am just totally confused. help me out.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: October 24, 2004 )

Sorry...
Sorry... edited!

( Posted by: 00Greenleaf00 [Member] On: November 24, 2005 )





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