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There once was a man from Brazil,
Who had the urge to kill.
He committed the crime,
And he's now doing the time,
Upon a tall tall hill.

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~ Blind courage is another way to say stupidity.


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The following comments are for "The Man from Brazil"
by 00Greenleaf00

Neat
Now that really paints a picture. I enjoyed this very much, especially the repetition in the last line : Upon a tall tall hill.

I can almost see how tall that hill is.
Well Done! Bravo!

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: October 20, 2004 )

Now I know !!!
I wondered what he's doing up there in that pose! Nice of you to answer Jesus Christ Pose!

Regardz

TeflonZ

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: October 20, 2004 )

Limerick a la Rio
What an international flavour this has.

( Posted by: Penelope [Member] On: October 20, 2004 )





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