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Author's Note: Over the last few months, Penelope has become my good friend. She asked me to describe my three daughter's personalities to her. From those brief, silly and honest little tidbits, she created these perfect and beautiful tributes to my kids. These are truly treasures to me. Thank you Pen!

SCARLETT
Scarlett’s just that sort of a girl.
Her turbine is geared for full speed.
Hot wired to the tip of each curl,
Scarlett’s just that sort of a girl.
A topsy turvy tilt-a-whirl.
She knows who she is, yes indeed!
Scarlett’s just that sort of a girl.
Her turbine is geared for full speed.


SOPHIE
Guardian girl, who shines guiding light.
She can sing the birds out of trees.
Keyboard dancer who gets numbers right.
Guardian girl, who shines guiding light,
disarms and charms with manners polite.
Her goals are to achieve and appease.
Guardian girl, who shines guiding light.
She can sing the birds out of trees.



OLIVIA
Olivia’s moods shift from sad to shy smiles.
Practicing perfection with persistent flair.
Ponders reflections of musical mosaic tiles.
Olivia’s moods shift from sad to shy smiles.
She can spin cartwheels for miles and miles.
Kaleidoscope girl who knows how to care.
Olivia’s moods shift from sad to shy smiles.
Practicing perfection with persistent flair.

PFA 10/11




------
Amy Corless


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The following comments are for "My Girls"
by arc

Arc and Pen
Here I am giving both Amy and Pen the ten score! And Claire(?) for being a nice aunt. :)

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: October 18, 2004 )

how wonderful Pen
I really like these. AND knowing you have made a good friend in LIT. Nice to know that. Arc, your girls sound like very beautiful beings. Those women in training!!! LOL. Pen you did a great job with these!!! wow.....

My best to you,
Darlene

( Posted by: dareva [Member] On: October 18, 2004 )

beautifully done Pen.....
I loved these....and Arc, they each sound so angelic and the apples of your eye. And of course, Auntie Claire I am sure you spoil them rotten...

( Posted by: CJHerlihy [Member] On: October 19, 2004 )

Little women
Wonderful writing here.

( Posted by: Revelation [Member] On: October 19, 2004 )

The Children
I wish my mom understood each kid like that.
Perhaps she did, She didn't" talk" with me.
I didnt "talk" either. I can see my family in each gal.
The fire ant, the protector, the singer, the caring, the shy,
the one with 2 speeds Fast and Faster. Sounds like a bunch of little ladies with Big Ideas!!

( Posted by: harpersfairy [Member] On: November 18, 2004 )





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