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“Do you think I am, “ she paused, smiling, and in mischief touched her teeth, “a carnivorous angler-fish?”
“No way, Achsahlee,” the Captain said.
“Do you want to play then?”
“Play what?”
“You call the shots, cap’n.”
“All right. I’m Ward Cleaver, and you, June.”

She invited his hand to stroke her slick teeth, and her lips held on to his fingers.
She squatted down, his fingers still between her lips. She looked up at him.

“You like it when I squat like this?”
His gaze met her eyes, blue and bottomless as a dream.
“That’s an air-brushed, porno-glamour squat. It’s beautiful.”
She laughed.
“With a torpedo like that, you should be in submarines!”
“I am,” he said with a left-leaning grin.
To which June said in a measured, luring voice: “How about this – the smooth, rocking rhythm, calves pressed to thighs, you holding me by the hair?”

Her never-tiring, seducing eyes were looking up at him. She smiled. The tip of her hide-and-seek, ill-disciplined and almost prehensile tongue licked her lips.
“Dazzling. You’re quite like June,” he said, smiling. “Enthralling.”
“You’re quite like Ward, eloquent even when you’re downright carnal.”

She swept her hair back and served him faithfully and shamelessly.

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The following comments are for "The Role Play For Achsahlee"
by Teflon

I think this deserves an Eartha Kitt like purr but I'm not sure how to spell it! I love the air-brushed, porno-glamour.


( Posted by: Philo [Member] On: October 21, 2004 )

1st off, thanks so much for your kind words and recipe to boot! I really appreciate it.

I enjoyed this juicy read, and found the Ward and June Cleaver get down and dirty fantasy absolutely delectable!

( Posted by: Wednesdaze [Member] On: October 21, 2004 )

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