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It is the Devil inside me,
Just as it's God in my heart.

It's my punishment and prison,
As much as it's my gift and release.

It's my embarassment and heartache,
As well as my pride and joy.

It's my failure,
Just as it's my success.

It is my fear,
And it is my Dream.

My thoughts on paper
For your eyes to read.


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The following comments are for "My Written Word"
by Reba

My Written Word
Hey Reba! Haven't read from you in a while. You did a really good job at showing what a writer is about! Much enjoyed.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: October 16, 2004 )

Nae & Claire
thank you both for your wonderful comments, and your warm welcome back!...I've missed this place, and especially the people in it...and Claire, I was happy to be able to write anything, but I'm even more happier that it's been recieved as well as it has...I guess I haven't totally lost it during this dry spell!...
thanks again, ladies :)
Reba

( Posted by: Reba [Member] On: October 21, 2004 )





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