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Sunshine rolls in
Lemon ice rivers,
Apple blossom breezes on my skin.
So many words we could have said
would they have changed anything?

Summer silence descends
bringing the lethargy I found in you.
My world was silent.
You were the sun and the stars
- the sky is black.
I was nothing.


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