What an interesting way to put together words. I love the grouping, you did an incredible job with so few words. Good job!!!
Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: January 26, 2005
debatertwig67 and Nae
debatertwig67 please forgive my tartiness in thanking you. It seems to me that postings are like flowers, you need to go and tend to them now and then. I'm glad I could help.
Nae, you spoil me with your attention and kind words. I tried to play with the groups of three so that every word was like a line, and each group told part of the story.
I also tried to make the first two and last to words in each group work as a separate phrase as well. And finally, I wanted to set a very slow pace, like stepping stones in a Japanese garden. Each step has something nice to see. -Philo
Posted by: Philo [Member] On: January 27, 2005
Add Your Comment
You Must be a member to post comments and ratings.
If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!