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I will shout your name to the skies.
for you are
The beautiful angel who saved me.

I will whisper your name to the stars,
and remember your eyes.
The essence of something pure,
untouched and mine forever.

I could cry from joy,
the way you touched my skin.
that embrace could blanket the world,
and cure my disease of ignorance.



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