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Shark tears a stout net
Spaniard smites a snorting bull
Bullet blew farewells.


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The following comments are for "Hemingway"
by Teflon

Bonus Points
I have to give you bonus points for using 'Spaniard smites' in a sentence, much less a haiku.

( Posted by: Chrispian [Admin] On: October 16, 2004 )

fine bulletware

I haven't switched. They are all in the same world. I give you a glimpse -- it's the wolrd of fine perfume, ballet audience in the naughty darkness, exciting writers and dinners and dicussions of the not-so-in-your-face art like Detlefsen and ...an irrational turn of events afterwards.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: October 17, 2004 )

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God bless ya for spelling Hemingway with one 'M'. I can't tell you what a pet-peeve that is!

Nicely done.

Like your last reply.

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: October 26, 2004 )





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