Average Rating 10 (1 votes) Rating Rated by 10 Dareva You must login to vote BLACK Deep sphere sound of motionless constantly revolving and growing towards GREEN Swirl children of the heavy earth and unite your leaves and bodies in a dance towards RED Sons of order-eating chaos and of eternal logic shattered in absurd raise your eyes towards BLUE Thin cold liquid of winged beings free-floating without any precise form or heavy substance towards WHITE Great single blinding dot burst of final heat bending nothingness around it and smiling coldly towards All below

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