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BLACK
Deep sphere sound of motionless constantly revolving and growing towards
GREEN
Swirl children of the heavy earth and unite your leaves and bodies in a dance towards
RED
Sons of order-eating chaos and of eternal logic shattered in absurd raise your eyes towards
BLUE
Thin cold liquid of winged beings free-floating without any precise form or heavy substance towards
WHITE
Great single blinding dot burst of final heat bending nothingness around it and smiling coldly towards
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