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Waves are made many miles away

They race to shore silent strong

With them they bring a tale from beyond time

Dark Unfathomable Beautiful

At dawn you`ll find the best waves

rejoicing in their new found freedom

breaking on the silky sand

Playful Primal Power

The wise man as he travels through life enjoys the scenery to either side,since he knows he will not come this way again.The road ahead winds back and forth,over the hills and far away,and who knows where it will lead?

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The following comments are for "Wave Power"
by racepool

i like this
very much!

( Posted by: therethere [Member] On: October 11, 2004 )

Thanks for the comment,glad you liked it..I feel at home in the sea...cheers..RP

( Posted by: racepool [Member] On: October 12, 2004 )

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