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Dear Time.

I miss you,
To hold your
very soul (you are the soul)
To talk to you,
And confess (there’s much i have to confess).
I meet failure everyday (without saying hello).

This letter, Time,
I will send it with the wind.
I miss you
once too often!

Another Day On Earth

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The following comments are for "(Unsend) Letter."
by therethere

claire. yes it is simple and genuine (i wrote this when i was 16) and i haven't been able to write like this in a while (unfortunately!).


( Posted by: therethere [Member] On: October 10, 2004 )

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