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Mouthwatering reds and greens
Tom Sawyer’s daydreams
paintings beg to be eaten.


Author's Note:
An inverted haiku, or 757 (unhaiku)

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The following comments are for "Paul Detlefsen"
by Teflon

sumptuous 757:

The artists coming up next on MY queue in Lit/_Submissions/_Draftslit.doc are Peder Monsted, Alexina Cherpin.

Do you know of other landscape and sea artists?


( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: October 14, 2004 )

Homer it is

Sure, precisely what I asked --landscape and sea.

I know he's painted a lot.

Teflon time.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: October 15, 2004 )

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