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Heartache
by thebeast (Member) - published: October 10, 2004
Word Count: 54 Word Bytes: 433 Viewed: 447 times
Category - Poetry
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Heartache
it's nothing new
to me
I've felt its
painful grip
so many times
before

It seems like
each time I
f
a
l
l
in love
it always ends
the same way
more pain

Break my arm
punch my face
but
don't break my heart
the pain is too much
to bear




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The following comments are for "Heartache"
by thebeast

heartache
Beast, interesting and graphic structure on fall. You made your plea, but you did it without angst, just fact with a touch of emotion. Good job.

Claire

( Posted by: Clairesbest [Member] On: October 10, 2004 )

new form invented
This is a very interesting poem with a visual exploration. Maybe you can perfect this style.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: October 12, 2004 )





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