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Choose titanium
for durability
and hope your fingers
never swells like my heart
at the sight of her.

Accent it with gold
precious enough to remind you
of your good fortune,
but not gaudy enough to
draw a strangers greedy eye.

Never take it off,
don't leave it hollow
a meaningless thing
keep it on your hand always
as you keep her in your heart.


------
Smile if you're stupid,
laugh if you understand.


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The following comments are for "On Choosing a Wedding Ring"
by Bartleby

wow Bart!!
Marry me!?!?!

This is so nice, what a beautiful love poem. To love, for love...nicely done. It is refreshing to read your poems...

Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

Wedding Rings
Beautiful Bart. Completely romantic. Loved it!
(Did Jess ever get that new ring?)

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

Rings
Not bad, Bart, lovely sentiment.

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

Wow

I'm not much of a poetry fan but if more poems were as good as yours...

( Posted by: whitewolfe [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

Show Off!
You know of course you're despised by all the men here for showing them up and adored by all the women (young & old) for being the romantic that you are. It's not enough to love someone...It's the showing it that counts. Since I likely will not be here for the Golden celebration...let me say it now! Congrats you two!

Grandma Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 9, 2004 )

Congrats,
To you and Jess. In these times to see two people so much in love, and so happy. Very nice Bart. I don't "despise" ;), maybe a little jealous though. Better hang on to him Jess (tightly).

( Posted by: snapshot [Member] On: October 9, 2004 )

Never take her for granted
This is beautiful.

( Posted by: Revelation [Member] On: October 10, 2004 )





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