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Another Group
Another Clique
Oh,can I join?
No,piss off
You`re too much of a geek

We don`t like you
or your kind
can`t you see?
We are too refined
So,piss off geek

Thank God for that
is all I can say
hugs all round?
You bunch of twats

The wise man as he travels through life enjoys the scenery to either side,since he knows he will not come this way again.The road ahead winds back and forth,over the hills and far away,and who knows where it will lead?

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The following comments are for "Can I Join?"
by racepool

I agree
with claire.

( Posted by: whitewolfe [Member] On: October 9, 2004 )

for your comments....I`m not sure how to respond except thank you....I write from the heart as that knows better....all writing I believe is for effect otherwise why write at all?I realize my work is not that endearing,I`m just a voice with nothing much to say,good or bad however it`s my voice...I`m glad you took the time to respond.....

( Posted by: racepool [Member] On: October 10, 2004 )

I appreciate the advice,I`ll keep it in mind,As you can tell I`m an amateur,but i do enjoy throwing words together and seeing what comes out of it.
I rarely re write my poetry,what I write I stick with,usually taking no time at all....maybe this is something I should work on...I`m usually happy with what I write the first time and I don`t want to change this normal? I don`t know?Just my style.....Thanks again Claire...oh btw,I loved that footprint picture,well cool.thanks for that,made my day.

( Posted by: racepool [Member] On: October 10, 2004 )

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