Freedom
by Pogirl (Member) - published: October 8, 2004
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Category - Poetry
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Freedom what does it mean
Does it mean do what you want
Is it a given right

Or

Is it etched in stone
Somewhere for all to see

Or

Maybe it's earned
Sometimes I wonder what it would be like not to be free
To have limitations

I think the true meaning of freedom
Is the freedom to be ourselves

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The following comments are for "Freedom"
by Pogirl

Loved...
...the 'or' interjections. I am a big fan of playing with forms. I think if you fleshed this one out a bit more, you know, put a little more individual spunk to it, the poem would be hot. But that's just one guy's opinion. Great stuff!

-SD

( Posted by: strangedaze [Member] On: October 9, 2004 )

freedom?
i think janis joplin said it best when she said "...freedom is just another work for nothing else to lose..."

( Posted by: thebeast [Member] On: October 9, 2004 )

freedom
Nice job, pogirl. A question everyone asks...but you came to a lovely conclusion. (Oh, and I disagree with Janis Joplin...surprise, surprise..lol)

Claire

( Posted by: Clairesbest [Member] On: October 10, 2004 )

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