Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
10

(3 votes)


RatingRated by
10Char
10Myth
10Robinbird

You must login to vote

 









Dreamless glades..
In the cold clear air of the heights
Where purity breathes fiery
The mists swirl around the trees
The path threads through..imperceptible..
You tread this path
Sensing, even through the murk
That the precipice drops
Into sheltered valleys of fragrant tea blossoms
That Hum Drum Man has carved out
Where you are
Loneliness makes your heart ring
But the drooling leopard of your dreams
-Stalks you...


 



 







 

------
RJKT


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Walking on the Wild Side"
by RJKT

Walking on the Wild Side
The title reeled me in and the poem wowed me. I especially like the last profound line.

Thanks,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

This Poem
I can't thank you both enough, for your comments which I found so very encouraging.

( Posted by: RJKT [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

RJKT/WILD SIDE...
how i missed this beautiful word flagrant write..
the last lines enraptured me, actually i found myself as a Pavlov's dog, "geess", really wanted to hear that but, i was in the salavation of it.

this is good writing, i loved it and somehow,
i ventured here...very good write!

Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: July 10, 2005 )

Robinbird-Thanks
Was most pleasantly surprised -to say the very least-by all that you've said.Must say I find it most encouraging.

Thank you very much .

( Posted by: RJKT [Member] On: July 10, 2005 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: