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They lurk under eaves sitting and
feeding-laying eggs and weaving
all day long;
Some search for laughter and some
hunt with spears-how many spiders
are in here?
On floors where we walk-in rooms
where we talk-sometimes they
will land on your lunch!
Do they mingle and play-why am
I so afraid-how many spiders
have you seen today?





D.E.M.-04

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D.E.M.


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The following comments are for "How many spiders?"
by Wetice

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It lacks drama. An allusion to a negative experience. An unpleasant surprise. Horror-bound tension.

"Some search for laughter and some
hunt with spears-how many spiders
are in here?" -- this is a nice and imaginative, but defintely NOT scary.

Maybe you have to draw on the most shocking memories to give it the vreepiness. Listen to Who's "Boris The Spider"--this is creepy and scary.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: October 14, 2004 )





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