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The rise and fall of a nation better
fits pages between two covers;
We have enough war and sympathy to
last a thousand years;
Regretfully writing words of fear
to lay stricken in our hearts
and minds forever;
There was a time, when everything
was normal-at least after the
Fall, we enjoyed a new beginning.



D.E.M.-04

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D.E.M.


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The following comments are for "After the fall"
by Wetice

The Shortfalls of Life
is to have fallen...
is to have lived...
is to have fallen again

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 8, 2016 )





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