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Several days and weeks have passed this year
quicker than most years pass-
-but I am waiting still, here;
In this colder than freezing chamber-
I look within and look around, trying
not to turn around;
Lazily, crazily-shattering and sometimes
a noise outside wakens me!
Yes, all was lost from me, and now all
that is left is my head to be found.

D.E.M.-04-Keeper Lock


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The following comments are for "The Lost Head"
by Wetice

I don't get this. You reference sight "look around" and sound "noise outside" yet you have no head.

You lost me there. I have had my head removed on several occasions and I can assure you that during the procedure I could neither see nor hear.


( Posted by: Jeff [Member] On: October 9, 2004 )

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