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Right! That`s it. You make me sick
I`ve had enough of all your stick
"Don`t do that. Do this and this."
God,you`re enough to drive anyone to piss.
All your moaning and groaning
Hear this woman,I`m gone by morning!
But wait,hang on.I nearly forgot........you`re all I bloody got
So,yes dear I hear and obey
I`ll do anything you say
But please realise you must know when to stop
Otherwise....no way you`re going on top.

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The wise man as he travels through life enjoys the scenery to either side,since he knows he will not come this way again.The road ahead winds back and forth,over the hills and far away,and who knows where it will lead?


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