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Morning
new day dawning
eyes open mind reflects
slips out of bed to start her day
her time

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CJ Herlihy


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The following comments are for "Her Time - A Cinquain"
by CJHerlihy

Carol
If only we realise the phrase 'my time' on a day to day basis, we will be the most accomplished human beings. I enjoyed this cinquain. Thanks.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: October 6, 2004 )





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