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Fields of telepathic mystics
Stretch on ever to the edge of the night
Waiting, waiting for their god
A massive religious blight

All standing patiently
Sure of their conviction
They wait for their god
As a single body of communication

Yet their lord never comes
He never arrives to lead them
Never descends to show them the light
Never forever for them

Slowly they begin to realize
The god within them all
Their deity present in any form they wished
To show them the light with no nightfall

Implanted within them at birth
A piece of their lord contained
In every single one of them
'til no more of their god remained

Stay metal!

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by xitwound117

There Is a Price for Darkness
Light comes not...
and with the darkness...
comes a price

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: September 15, 2015 )

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