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As the day wears down
I begin to frown
I am hopeless
Nothing to live for
Im sitting alone
No one by my side
I see your face
In a picture nearby
Tears drop
From both sides of my face
I need to know
How much time I waste
Trying to be what you want
Slowly realizing
I'll never come near
To the things you need
To feel loved
Anger begins to build
As i grab my wrist
And take the razor
And begin to cut
My feelings have
Brought nothing but pain
I end my life
And am for once happy
Because I no longer need
To love you...

------
King Lucifer


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The following comments are for "End of Days"
by King Lucifer

Morbid
That's sort of depressing and morbid, though i guess it was meant to be. Just the mental image of someone slicing their wrist makes me cringe.

( Posted by: Concept [Member] On: October 6, 2004 )

Heh
Well, thanks on complementing me, I created a new account it is KingOfHearts so look for some of my stuff

( Posted by: King Lucifer [Member] On: February 10, 2005 )





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