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The memories of you are the
Only thing I have.
Those memories are the only things that keep me alive.

Us laughing, crying, kissing, our love undying.

Thats what i though, all those years together.
Why did you change your mind? The love undying was perfect.

So much in common, without you im nothing.

Foolish hope that you might come back, tears my life away.

Sitting alone wiht your picture in my hands, crying, I thought i was dying.
Watching out the window, waiting for you to walk in the door.

My foolish hope beings to fade, As i walk to grab the blade...

King Lucifer

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