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A rat took a trip to the moon,
In an oversized purple balloon.
While floating in space,
He painted his face,
And returned to the Earth a raccoon.

...And people wonder where rabies comes from...

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Over 16% of Beef destined for human consumption contains cow parts. (Wonder what the rest is made of?)



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The following comments are for "Moonshine."
by Echidna

Funny
You're poem is still as funny as when I first read it from you. It's so adorable. This makes a great children's poem. *gives you a cup of sugar*

( Posted by: Concept [Member] On: October 5, 2004 )





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