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As the Kit exploded, Tyfer cheered. He turned his ship to the left and fired a burst of lasers. He pulled up and caught on trying to excape. Within a matter of seconds, there was nothing left. Just then, several ships entered the atmosphere. Tyfer remembered them as Typhoons. Filled with excitment, he fliped on the comm link.

"It's about time, what took ya."

"Nothing, we just, what the heck is-ack."

Tyfer watched as Mada's ship burst into flames and spiralled into the water. Memories of him and Mada quickly faded from his mind. Suddenly, he lost it, Tyfer sped into the fray. Shooting Kit after Kit, until there was nothing left, except for him and the Seties.

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Welcoming To My World...


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The following comments are for "Star Gazers 5:Rescue on Keller 7 part 2"
by kickflip

Kickflip...
Was it supposed to be short? Or was this the end of the story or something? I just seems sortta... weird if you will...

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: April 20, 2002 )





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