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Author's Note:
For Eugenia


Angel’s face beckoned:
Say my name, gluttonous you!
I lilt: “Lo-lee-ta.”


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The following comments are for "Jeremy Irons"
by Teflon

jeremy irons
that is delicious...really good

( Posted by: arc [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

I love your minimalist and sensual style.

Thank you for honouring me.


( Posted by: inmost [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

the Hemingway sensuality
Wait, I caught myself -- this almsot begs for a haiku on Hemingway!

Why is it that it's women that really feel (and read) haikus?

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

I like it
I am not really into haikus, either, Teflon. The one thing I like about them is their length. I am a lover of brevity and they smack of that, when done well; as this one is.


( Posted by: Char [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

Brevity, Women and Haikus
Thank you, Char.

I 've just unearthed Windchime's comment in Ivor's thread where she reminds all that haikus should not discuss people ( I think that makes sense.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: October 9, 2004 )

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