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Deep down we are all the same

same fears same hopes same desires

what`s different is on the surface

different looks different colours different lives

look into my eyes and you will see

just a person maybe like you lost at sea

tossed about by the storm called life

directionless homeless loveless

adrift abandoned alone

there`s no one there to catch my hand

as I fall no magic power no saviour no one

but isn`t that that makes us strong

get up! keep going get on with it

there`s no starting gun no finish line

so give a smile or a frown

doesn`t matter really

what goes around comes around

The wise man as he travels through life enjoys the scenery to either side,since he knows he will not come this way again.The road ahead winds back and forth,over the hills and far away,and who knows where it will lead?

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