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Still, I dream of you
even though you're gone,
I wonder how you're doing
and if you miss me some.

Still, I love you dearly
even though you're not here,
I know I'll never forget you
and I'll always care.

Still, it seems like yesterday
when you were by my side.
Have you ever thought of me
and hung your head and cried?

Still, if you could undo
all that was done,
would you still walk away
and leave me all alone?


------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "Still"
by Char

Char, how wonderous
Beautifully crafted my dear. Another one of my ultimate favorites of yours. Just keep them coming in girl!!!

My Best to you,
Darlene xo

( Posted by: dareva [Member] On: October 5, 2004 )

Char
This is what's always, always sad in remembering, when the one who stole the heart is already oblivious of everything and the one who's been left alone knows that she can't just throw away even the faintest of their memories.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: October 5, 2004 )

Song
I can hear the music in this. It rings clearly, and reminds me of a song. It is sad and very nice.

( Posted by: Revelation [Member] On: October 5, 2004 )

My deepest thanks
to you Dar, Peter, Revelation, and Windchime. I am happy you like this. I value your comments and thank you for making time for moi. :)

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: October 8, 2004 )

Inevitable
Char,you are wonderfully made with words,but death is inevitable and we all must go ahead and leave death with its foolery.I like your work,but death I hate.Stop crying.
Princeo

( Posted by: princeo [Member] On: October 24, 2004 )

Excuse me Princeo...
But this is not about dying....not even close. And I am not crying. I rarely cry and I don't do it publically.

Thanks,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: October 24, 2004 )





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