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Called out,
3 strikes,
Catch-22.
Drama seems to happen no matter what I do.
Try to free myself from this hypocrisy
only to be trapped by the things she says to me.

Too many stories come from too many mouths
so you never know jus what I'm all about.
Try to be honest, try to be true,
but all their speeches make me a villain to you.


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The following comments are for "Caught..."
by willreaves

caught
speaks volumns-nice read, I like it. To be honest & true not as easy as it sounds? I think honesty is the best option - whether it hurts or not.

( Posted by: CC [Member] On: October 2, 2004 )





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