Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

tear stained pages
so many words
but i can't see them
the ink has blurred
i used to know
i used to see
but somehow, somewhere
i lost track of me
don't know where i'm headed
don't know where to look
i've been lost in the pages
of life's confusing book


------
<<-Hillary->>


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Lost..."
by IamMEdontTRYtoCHANGEit

Lost...
Boy, do i know the feeling. The worst part is when you loose your bookmark.

I found your poem short yet honest. It's something I can personal relate to which is pretty neat.

( Posted by: Concept [Member] On: October 1, 2004 )

Lost but reading a map
Hilary,

Beautiful poetry written from the gut. Only when we are lost, confused, hurting can we learn and eventually find ourself. You username speaks for you 'IamMEdontTRYtoCHANGEit' and how true it is. You will change many times in your life, but 'you' will find the way to go, not somebody else!

Your poetry reminds me of the old saying:

'No pain without gain.'

It doesn't stop it hurting like hell though, but the gain will come.

Thanks for a very good piece of poetry.

Ivor


( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: October 3, 2004 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: