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Spinning in circles
Reaching out for hope
Looking for answers
Only getting questions
Drowning in fear
Grasping for a breath
Tears are falling
My face is wet
What's happening to me?
Why do I feel like this?
I used to be put together
Now I'm just a mess...
The tears still come
I'm still drowning, make it stop
The questions are heavy
My hope is still lost
Trying to cope with all this pain
But keep spinning in circles
Gotta hold on again


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