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fraternity night
February Sturgeon Moon
paddles spank young butts

crystal face I kiss
tongue tastes like sweet cold rain
I fall into pond

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The following comments are for "initiation rites"

Thanks Jess for reading, I had a hard time counting the syllables for February, though.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: October 1, 2004 )

Thanks, why, it's early evening here. I worried so much about using 'sturgeon moon'.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: October 1, 2004 )

frat life

This reminds me of why I never joined a fraternity... As Claire so aptly put it I have no desire to take it like a man... This was a refreshingly light read, that made me laugh before my eyes even see color...

Thanks for the pick me up... and welcome back


( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: October 1, 2004 )

Yes, I was chuckling even before the comments I read above this one. It is SUCH a welcome to read you again Peter. I have missed you.
This is a nice feeling to have tonight. Thanks for this chuckle...well done!!

( Posted by: dareva [Member] On: October 1, 2004 )

Bart and Dar
Matt, thanks. I myself didn't join, well almost! I just got so afraid when it came to the spanking time.

Dar, very nice of you. But I'm sure you yourself have memories of your sorrority? Do they have paddlings as well?

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: October 2, 2004 )

Only the addled get paddled!
Peter, I'm with you. Why anyone would put him/her self through this, just to be "cool" I'll never understand. My boys never did either, they thought it was hilarious that most of the "jocks" did, just to say they "belonged!"

New Jersey is really frowning on it today...too many serious incidents (including death) have resulted in the last few years, and most of the schools and sports organizations have banned them, and some fraternaties have been booted off campus because of it! It's about time!

In the good old days before child special services that frowns on spanking, my kids used to laugh and say they got enough paddling at home...who needs more!

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: October 2, 2004 )

Ma Bea
Before you caught me in the act of mixing potions in a sidewalk! Now, in the act of almost joining a frat, that should shame me :) Thanks for reading me, good thing cybersons don't really get spanking. Luv, Peter

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: October 4, 2004 )

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