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I watch from the darkness, I observe from above
I see a black forest, surrounding a cove
I beat my wings, moving closer still
I ready myself for the practiced kill

You may take me, for a bird from above
or maybe you see me as a raven-black dove
but either of these, I am not
but a mixture of beasts, made inside of a pot

It matters not as I charge down
my face frozen inside a frown
it matters not as you look up
and you see me coming to gobble you up.

-Chill

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Dreams that disturbe you when you sleep,
and haunt you when you are awake.
Make up a mirror of who and what you are,
spiritually.


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by chill

Show Evil the Back Side of the Helping Hand
Mmmmm
Beast Mix...!
Does that come in a Hamburger Helper?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 11, 2016 )





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