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Something has happened to me
A conscience ailment without diagnosis
Running in me like a virus
Which want to hamper me

Such impediment has no doctor
But there are doctors wherever I went
Who seem no interested to attend to me
Whereas there are a lot who could assist

So I have been going and travelling
But now, I was told Asor is a qualified doctor
My liver condensed and now I can rest
Such melancholy which only poetry has put me into

I want to be known and recognised before I die
Though I am not sick
But poetry has made me wander
Searching for a director
Here I am with Asor
Which hope now proved renaisance.

Prince O. Onwumere

Copyright 2004 Prince O. Onwumere

This poem was first published by poetry.com


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The following comments are for "Letter to Asor"
by princeo

An Exorcist
I like your idea of a poem, and without a doctor to go to, an exorcist could be a good option. I understand this kind of desire to be recognised before becoming extinct.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: September 30, 2004 )

Nice write
I understand the feeling too. Once I started painting it was the first thing that came to mind...will I get everything I want to paint, painted, before I die? In hopes that someone might notice that I was here. Thanks for sharing.

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 30, 2004 )





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